Comment Submitted by Christine L. Dolen, San Joaquin County Department of Aging

Great information, but too much information in one brochure. The information should be split into two brochures. One that deals with the first part of the brochure-"Facts...K-1 and K-3 visas" and the second part-"Domestic Violence...and rights" The information is also too technical. It does not speak to the intended audience which will probably include those with more limited English. I found myself having to read and reread some sections in small pieces to fully understand what the point and/or meaning was. The brochure is extremely wordy. There were places where a bullet point list may have surficed instead of the detailed explanation.